Tuesday, November 16, 2010

A Dream..

Once upon a time there lived a pretty girl called Catherine. She always wore white clothes. One morning a terrible nightmare woke her up and she found herself lying in a dirty and dark jungle surrounded by rotten meat all around. The disgusting smell left her feeling nauseated. She tried to get up but her knees felt weak and her white clothes were full of mud. She just wanted to escape from all this dirty scene not wanting to know what was all this about and how she ended up there. She felt like crying but she had no tears left. She longed for her sweet pup, whose bright eyes used to make her forget all her worries. Crawling, she was trying to get away, she was pushing herself way too much believing that once she reaches where she wants to be, all these efforts will be worth it. And suddenly she saw it! The big brown rosewood door! Beautifully carved, it was a piece of art indeed! It looked very grand with all those shiny brass knobs. She was wondering what would be waiting for her on the other side? Will she be able to breathe clean, fresh air again or will it be worse than her present surrounding? Not knowing what to do, she stood there for a few hours. Then, with a lot of courage she decided to take the risk and softly turned the bass knob. And there it was! She closed her eyes as the sweet, cool breeze ran through her hair. She slightly opened her eyes to look at the bright yellow sunlight. Beautiful green fields with yellow flowers, birds chirping...it made her forget all her pain. She had successfully completed her journey to The Heaven finally!


-omi

6 comments:

  1. @ Snehanka : it was a dream! :|

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  2. was this ur dream babdya? whtever it was....its one beautiful para....the scene actually starts happening in front of ur eye...Gud work!!!

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  3. @ Komal : thanks a lot! :) ( उगाच formality! ) :D

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  4. Just reminded me of 'Memories of Midnight' . . . :) :)

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  5. Oo i like how it starts n most part of it, maybe you shouldnt have ended it.. open end would've also been good. Somehow i felt the end was a little lame.. darker would've been brilliant.. but thats me ;) :D

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